I stop to ponder to reminisce to recollect myself
Now vacant distant memories placed on a shelf
Fathomless echoes calling to me
Across the lands and over the seas
Faint hums of chaos still drifts into my dreams
An occasional cry of grief trickles at my soul’s window seams
Here I feel no remorse just the cool ocean breeze
No hidden agendas, masks, nor pseudo-formalities
I may have given up my soul to finally have this tranquil peace
As for this simple vagabond poet, I have finally found
release…….
.
_________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Hugs you tight...that sounds somewhat sad yet with a simple little touch of joy.
Hugs,
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Mon Mar 12, 2007 4:31 am
Avant-garde
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Posts: 2850
Location: NY
Eire,
Thank you for always taking the time out to read my poems, that means a great deal to me. Yes there is a bit of sadness. But the Joy and the freedom are so very worth it.
Hugs mmmm, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Mon Mar 12, 2007 11:37 am
Xalia1 Moderators
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Location: In love
Rouse,
Wonderful write.
Loved the last two lines hun.
Rock on.
(((((((Rouse))))))))))))))
Hugs,
Xalia _________________ Nobody said life would be easy...They just promised it would be worth it.
~♥♥~
~The words fail me.. because what I feel for you is beyond description...~
Mon Mar 12, 2007 6:19 pm
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
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ah, i really like this...
surrendering of the soul... ahhhhh
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:30 pm
Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
Xalia,
giggles..... Thanks my friend. I think I have finally adjusted to my move to NY. I have so much freedom now. More than any one will ever know. You always Rock.....
hugs, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Mon Mar 12, 2007 10:50 pm
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Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
The Love,
Yessss the surrendering of the soul.....makes my peace of mind so very worth it. I am pleased that you liked this.
hugs, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
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