Today I eat the bites of pain, one to one, and I swallow the words that tear my existence.
Infront of the passing laughters I cover my ears.
If I have died already it does not matter, it's been a long time since I've feel the beats of my heart.
It is strange how nobody understands, as nobody turns toward my bleeding eyes.
Where do i left my world? Where it sank?
In which splits of my flesh abandonment its track?
I have only my dreams, my incarnate dreams in tears,
and my memories
those that nobody can remove form me,
those ones for who I open my eyes in the day, and YOU,
my most beautiful YOU..
It's been a long time girls, hope you like it, and hope you can understand it, greetings from Mexico ya all!! kisses _________________ FoR All ThE TraCe Of TeArS LeFt On ThE FlOoR...
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
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Sun Mar 11, 2007 5:08 am
Jolie
Joined: 13 Apr 2005
Posts: 78
Location: Mexico
hi
you r so so sweet, thanks for remember hope u liked the writing, hugs _________________ FoR All ThE TraCe Of TeArS LeFt On ThE FlOoR...
Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:55 pm
csan
Joined: 30 Aug 2006
Posts: 204
Location: California
Hola
Jolie,
I felt this one deeply. It is a very good poem. Muy bonito.
Carol
Tue Mar 13, 2007 8:28 am
Jolie
Joined: 13 Apr 2005
Posts: 78
Location: Mexico
csan
thanks for your comment, i guess this poem have very powerful words and i felt every one of them, MUCHAS GRACIAS!! besos _________________ FoR All ThE TraCe Of TeArS LeFt On ThE FlOoR...
quote:Originally posted by Jolie:
you r so so sweet, thanks for remember hope u liked the writing, hugs
Jolie,
Yes I like it
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
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