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Undefeated (Just a one minute Love Slam)

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melons
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Undefeated (Just a one minute Love Slam)

I love her more than anyone I have ever known
and like a sapling my love has grown
into one of those giant canopied trees;
she has now brought me to my knees
and near-felled me like an ancient oak.
Never defeated,
I am concealed in my cloak
of love-leaves now surrendered,
.........scattered around,
.........cascading,
tumbling towards earthy ground,
surrounding her with My loves seed.
Oh yes, dear lover,
You cannot breathe
through the perfume of loves curtain,
of that, I am certain.
.......Such freshness
.......such goodness
held within each scented vein,
spills....
as my love continues to rain
on You.

Post Thu Feb 09, 2006 5:05 pm 
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animaanna



Joined: 22 Aug 2005
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Location: Portland, OR


I've read this several times, and each time...not sure if I should respond...

I have to say that the poem itself has wonderful imagery and style. As for the topic, I hope Cat can see your love through the leaves. Solid, true love is hard to find and harder to hold on to, but worth more than anything in the world. Wish you much love and happiness.

Jillian
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Post Sat Feb 11, 2006 3:04 pm 
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melons
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quote:
Originally posted by animaanna:
I've read this several times, and each time...not sure if I should respond...

I have to say that the poem itself has wonderful imagery and style. As for the topic, I hope Cat can see your love through the leaves. Solid, true love is hard to find and harder to hold on to, but worth more than anything in the world. Wish you much love and happiness.

Jillian
(((((((((((jillian)))))))))) thank you for responding, I must have missed this or missed the responder email. Cat can see my love Smile YAY!! *smiling real big. Thank you so much for your love and well wishes, they mean a lot to me.

hugs'n'stuff

Mel xx

Post Sun Mar 05, 2006 11:38 pm 
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Linda Bray



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Mel,
Beautiful and a wonderful tribute to Cat!!!! I wish you both an everlasting love. Take good care of each other!!!
Love yassssssss,
linda
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Linda Bray

Post Wed Mar 08, 2006 4:31 am 
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MdmPrez



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Undefeated

Well, I'm responding to this 3 1/2 yrs late. Don't I feel like a jerk.
Mel wrote this when I was disturbed with her and I 'refused' to read this.
IT IS BRILLIANT!!!
I love the strength of it and the committment it shows.
You are an amazing writer sweetheart!

((((((((((((((((((((( Mel ))))))))))))))))))))))


Cat


p.s. I carry your heart in mine.

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