I will tell you more I’ll tell you everything
Not even but also..that
.....I’ll not wait a day I will not wait for a night
.....For the chance of saying
............I will hug you close I’ll hug you tight against me
............And whisper all clearly
................that I love you
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“’cos the moment I hold you to me,” – C. Hinds/J. Hartman _________________ It's the one who won't be taken, who cannot seem to give. – A. McBroom
"Ja O ja"
Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:45 am
Fernanda.F.Rocha
Joined: 17 Aug 2006
Posts: 1392
Location: Portugal
Lovely _________________ "We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are" - Anais Nin.
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Thu Sep 07, 2006 3:52 am
rainy_night
Joined: 01 Sep 2006
Posts: 32
Location: RSA
Thank you LadyMoon,
such lovely feedback is umm... very very nice. _________________ It's the one who won't be taken, who cannot seem to give. – A. McBroom
"Ja O ja"
Thu Sep 07, 2006 7:15 am
rainy_night
Joined: 01 Sep 2006
Posts: 32
Location: RSA
quote:Originally posted by Eiregirl:
rainy...Lady said it perfectly...LOVELY
Eiregirl
Eiregirl...
You are building my confidence here. Using the English language (ie. taal)doesn't seem so...impossible any more.
Thanks
rainy _________________ It's the one who won't be taken, who cannot seem to give. – A. McBroom
"Ja O ja"
Thu Sep 07, 2006 7:27 am
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