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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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MY MEL
She tells me that she loves me
I say 'I cherish your love'
She says I have her heart
I carry it with kid gloves
Her love to me is precious
Then again, so is she
Love to wake up each day
Tell her what she means to me
I can't find enough words
To describe the love I feel
But to the moon and back again
It's more than that, it's so real
I need to write a new dictionary
All with superlative words
Telling her she's the 'bestest' in the world
My book would have no verbs
So when I think about my Mel
I kiss her hand and say
Honey, you are my angel
Forever and a day _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:16 am |
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Jules
Joined: 22 Feb 2005
Posts: 904
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Awwww sweet, I like that. _________________ Never again
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Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:35 am |
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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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Jules
Thanks Jules for reading about HER.
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Sat Oct 21, 2006 3:01 pm |
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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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Eire
Thanks so much for reading about MY MEL.
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Sat Oct 21, 2006 3:02 pm |
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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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MY MEL
I'm so happy you like my scrappy attempt to write about my love for you.
Scrappy or not, I love you to pieces. I so wish I could write like you do, but you are so talented, I can't even come close.
You are the sun in my sky baby, I adore you.
Your Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Sat Oct 21, 2006 3:06 pm |
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desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted
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sweet
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Sat Oct 21, 2006 7:33 pm |
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DarkChyldesKiss
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Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Posts: 3381
Location: Inner Sanctum
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Cat,
This is the sweetest thing I've read! I'm giving you a fricken shiny awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Hugs
Jan _________________ (©2001-2011+-...... darkchyldeskiss aka wyldemere )
(All works are copyrighted and protected.
DO NOT copy my writing without Permission!)
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Tue Oct 24, 2006 7:49 pm |
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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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Dark
I'm so glad you liked this about HER. Thanks for your 'shiny awwwwww'.
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Thu Nov 02, 2006 3:09 pm |
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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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Mel
Glad you dragged this back out. I have to say I like it, even tho I wrote it.
It really captures, in my own scrappy way, the love I have for you.
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Wed Mar 07, 2007 2:52 pm |
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dRED1
Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific
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Absolutely wonderful!
((((((((Mdm))))))))))
Amazing poem! your love for Mel (and her love for you) shines through each line of this beautiful write. It's so heartwarming to read of a love so wondrous as you two share.
P.S. Mel thanks for bumping this
Hugs,
Gel _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
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Fri Apr 13, 2007 8:55 am |
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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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Gel
Thanks for coming by to read my little piece. Glad you liked it.
(((((((((((((Gel))))))))))))
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Mon Apr 16, 2007 5:34 pm |
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