You know you're hot Cat, this is for you baby.....
Oh baby, you're so hot
you make me wild when you tantalize....
Oh baby, you're so hot
all I can do is fantasize.
I never knew you could make love like this
and when I feel your steamy kiss
that's when the attraction pulls me
into your arms and we dance sexily,
swaying back and forth, stepping left to right
pressed together real tight.
When I feel every part of you
that's my heaven, my delight.
Don't stop
You're so hot.
Oh baby, last night you were ecstasy
when you rode me in New York City,
skyscrapers rising all around
as we travelled a horse and carriage uptown;
rocking and swaying, side to side
feeling the perfection of our ride,
slow then fast, you never let me go
you rode me beyond my euphoric plateau.
Oh baby, you're so hot,
I never want you to stop
oozing sex appeal when you tantalize,
cos' I'm in heaven with your lips on mine;
let me hear your cries tonight
when all I can do is fantasize....
let me touch you,
let me feel your hips rise;
I never knew love could feel so right.
Oh baby, last night you were ecstasy
when you rode me in New York City
passing through central park
as a perfect sunset turned night-dark;
I never knew you could make love this way
with your hair swaying in golden disarray
rubbing the heat of your sex into me
feel the attraction.....you're so sexy.
All I can do is fantasize
beneath the lure of your blue-green eyes.
Oh baby, you're so hot,
I never want you to stop
making me wild when you tantalize
cos' I'm in heaven with you, my seductress,
when you stroke me
with such sexual finesse;
so let me hear your cries tonight
as I fantasize....
when you press your body close to mine
I'll feel the heat, the tension,
and in perfection, we'll intertwine.
Oh baby, you're so hot,
don't stop,
don't stop...
all I can do is fantasize.
I could swear I just read this wonderful piece of work a few minutes ago...
hmmm OH WELL IT IS WELL WORTH READING UMMM I MEAN SINGING AGAIN
Wonderful piece Melons
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Sun Oct 22, 2006 5:02 am
Mairi bheag
Joined: 04 Mar 2005
Posts: 5094
Location: Scotland
*
loosens her collar
* Bloody nora! Whew!
Mb
xx
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Sun Oct 22, 2006 9:22 am
Xalia1 Moderators
Joined: 05 May 2004
Posts: 3702
Location: In love
Mel,
WOW.
This was amazing...
whew... thanks for sharing it, rock on.
((((((Mel)))))))
Hugs,
Xalia
Sun Oct 22, 2006 2:17 pm
Waiting for you
Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 16
Location: Washingon
Damn Mel,
Thats really hot. Great job. I love it.
W4U
Tue Dec 05, 2006 6:55 am
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
((((((eire)))))))
quote:Originally posted by Eiregirl:
hmmm
I could swear I just read this wonderful piece of work a few minutes ago...
hmmm OH WELL IT IS WELL WORTH READING UMMM I MEAN SINGING AGAIN
Wonderful piece Melons
Eiregirl
LOL....you did! Thank you for the lovelycomment hun,
hugs,
Mel x
Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:02 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
((((((((Mair))))))))
quote:Originally posted by Mairi bheag:
*
loosens her collar
* Bloody nora! Whew!
Mb
xx
Hey, I understand the phrase bloody nora!! lol...I was expecting some scottish phrase that I'd have to ask the meaning of lol
hugs
Mel xx
Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:03 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
(((((((Xalia))))))))
quote:Originally posted by Xalia1:
Mel,
WOW.
This was amazing...
whew... thanks for sharing it, rock on.
((((((Mel)))))))
Hugs,
Xalia
Thank you for the cool comment Ya see what Cat inspires in me...including the writing lol.
hugs,
Mel x
Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:05 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
((((((((waiting)))))))
quote:Originally posted by Waiting for you:
Damn Mel,
Thats really hot. Great job. I love it.
W4U
Glad you loved my poem, thanks for stopping to read
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