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such an ugly way to meet such a beautiful person

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NitWhit



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Location: United States
such an ugly way to meet such a beautiful person

I remember my father leaving for work that morning, and him telling me he'd be home soon.
I remember the crisp sound the autumn leaves made as my Uncle Ronnie pulled into my driveway.
I remembering him telling me that he wanted to take me somewhere, and me unlocking the door.
I remember the muskey smell of smoke coming from the basement chimney and the cool air brushing my face.
I remember climbing into that old beat down truck and almost vomiting from the horrid smell it was producing.
I remember the woods and the bumps as he drove me somewhere unfamiliar.
I remember wanting to stop and play in the numerous mud puddles the tires were sloshing through
I remember that old wooden house that was practically decaying right in front of my eyes.
I remember stepping out, and walking towards it.
I remember being entranced by the smell of sawdust and burning leaves.
I remember asking questions about where we were
I remember him answering
He said this was my great great grandmother's old house, and he wanted me to see it.
I remember standing beside a worn out couch
and I remember his arm on my shoulder.
I remember wanting to move, and then I remember doing so
I remember him grabbing my arm, and him telling me to stay still.
I remember pushing free and running through the door.
I remember the sound of the crickety wood slamming against the frame of the house
I remember looking back to see him chasing me
I remember him catching me.
I remember him forcing me to the ground
I remember my prayers that sounded so fierce in my head.
I remember him falling off of me.
I remember her tear and mud stained face.
Every detail, as if it was only yesterday.
I remember her sobs as she continued to beat him with the pick ax she had used before.
I remember her dropping to her knees and holding her head in her hands, still wailing
I remember inching closer to her, and pulling her hair behind her ears.
I remember looking into her eyes and seeing nothing but pure horror.
I remember holding her close to me and trying to calm her down.
I remember her telling me her name was Taylor.
I remember thinking it was a beautiful name.

Post Mon Aug 24, 2009 11:52 pm 
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Allison



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A bit disturbing, but powerful write. Good job Whit.

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Post Wed Aug 26, 2009 10:30 pm 
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NitWhit



Joined: 17 Jun 2008
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Location: United States


Haha...yes it is disturbing. And what's worse is that the uncle Ronnie character is a real guy. That didn't really happen or anything, but he's someone you look at, and then you're like wow, he gives me horrible vibes. I've heard stories about him, and my parents always made me go in my room when he came over. I was visiting, and he happened to be over on that day, and that same night I had a nightmare that was vaguely similar to my story, so I decided to run with it, and tie something togehter.

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