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Post Sat Jan 16, 2010 9:05 pm 
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MysteryGirl
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Fascinating beginning B, very descriptive. Im intrigued and looking forward to more.



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BdeCaunteton



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Post Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:39 am 
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Allison



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Very good beginning B. I felt like I could step riht into the scene with the way you described it. I am very intrigued by where you will take us in this story. Good opening cacth. It shows that you have put a lot of thought into the beginning. Please continue.

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Post Tue Jan 19, 2010 7:31 pm 
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Allison



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Most welcome B now add more, I know you have it LOL. Great job!

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i like it b. is like watching a movie in my head.
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