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Raven
Joined: 20 Jan 2005
Posts: 1409
Location: Basking in the Garden |
Smiles at waiting and bows . . . glad you liked it so much chica, I'll try to give you something new soon.
Glares at sway . . . don't try to act all innocent angel . . . I know that look and voice, but you know I cant resisit either too so . . kisses sway's nose, I'll try for you too. love ya, A
Rave _________________ Love is my Salvation and Destruction.
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Fri Dec 08, 2006 12:03 pm |
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drdj2006
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 183
Location: Ohio Yall |
your flipin kidding me
come on rav i know you can finish this
its too good not to
this is a great story
you cant just leave it there
please finish this one
there are too many good stories that go unfinished
and your to good to have one of those stories
i knwo you can finish it
ill be looking for another post from you
love ya
you sixers _________________ I promise that to all the pain there is pleasure. That no matter how hurt you could ever be there is always something better waiting for you.
SIX
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Sat Dec 09, 2006 12:58 pm |
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Flame
Joined: 12 Sep 2006
Posts: 92
Location: Florida |
Please give us more. It's just too awesome to leave it like that...your cliffhangers are great, but you really should continue. It's been awhile, but please finishing...leaving us when she knocks the door is just mean =p _________________ The greatest disappointment in life is not reaching high and falling short, but reaching low and succeed.
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 10:55 pm |
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wyldhart
Joined: 02 Dec 2004
Posts: 1216
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...slowly walks in....looks around wide-eyed....my god women...don't you know what a tease she is?....she loves to keep you on the edge..clit tease that she is**wicked grin**..got to love her!!...i'm sure most of you don't know who I am....but my sis...well..she has another awesome story that takes you away....and tells about her angels....a worthy read, if I must say so myself**wicked grin** http://www.melswebs.com/storyboards/viewtopic.php?t=439
I love you, My Little Bird..and I hope life is good for you at this moment in time....
hugs..kisses..and all that jazz....**slow sexy smile**
your..
wyldfyre..
always..
_________________ "wyld in the darkest places of your mind"
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Thu Dec 14, 2006 3:40 am |
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Raven
Joined: 20 Jan 2005
Posts: 1409
Location: Basking in the Garden |
Grins at my sixers. Awww suga you gone and made me grin from ear to ear. I'll try to not dissapoint. Glad you like it so much so far though.
Kisses,
Rave _________________ Love is my Salvation and Destruction.
Last edited by Raven on Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:45 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:41 pm |
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Raven
Joined: 20 Jan 2005
Posts: 1409
Location: Basking in the Garden |
I so like Flame even if she did call me mean cause she thinks I make cliffhangers . . . if only she knew it was just laziness lmao. _________________ Love is my Salvation and Destruction.
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Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:43 pm |
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Raven
Joined: 20 Jan 2005
Posts: 1409
Location: Basking in the Garden |
Blinks startled . . . Wyld? . . . is that you luv? Wow and . . . WOW. Poetry Land's been lucky enough to have the benifit of your fyrey words here and there still but I can't remember the last time you graced the world of Stories . . . and to comment on ont of my stories . . . and make reference to another . . stops and glares yeah by the way, "thanks a lot for that" if I start getting threatened to finish that one too im gonna have to . . . well shoot im to tired to hunt you down so I guess I wouldnt do anything but miss ya. Come around more often crazy so dark and I can laugh at how wyld you are. Oh and dont go tell all my secrets they dont ALL know I'm a tease, the newbies aint learned . . . yet.
Life . . . the "wife" and kids, are all great.
Smiles warmly and kisses your nose.
Stay you sis, even if it's crazy lol. _________________ Love is my Salvation and Destruction.
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Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:51 pm |
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DarkChyldesKiss
Site Admin
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Posts: 3381
Location: Inner Sanctum |
*Breaks out my Secret note book with all kinds of things about Raven. I take notes about......................................* _________________ (©2001-2011+-...... darkchyldeskiss aka wyldemere )
(All works are copyrighted and protected.
DO NOT copy my writing without Permission!)
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Sat Dec 30, 2006 10:33 pm |
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DarkChyldesKiss
Site Admin
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Posts: 3381
Location: Inner Sanctum |
Beg? *hits raven's secret comm link to see if it inspires her to write* _________________ (©2001-2011+-...... darkchyldeskiss aka wyldemere )
(All works are copyrighted and protected.
DO NOT copy my writing without Permission!)
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Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:28 am |
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Raven
Joined: 20 Jan 2005
Posts: 1409
Location: Basking in the Garden |
lmaooooooooooooooooooooo too funny. When I do add I think I'm gonna have to repost it all. There's like pages upon pages of nothing but people tell me to get off my behind. Wont promise nothing since I seem to fail at that so bad, but I will say that I've ben getting the writing itch lately so maybe there will be something soon.
Chuckles at Dark and kisses her nose - nope didnt help. Love yas though.
Rave _________________ Love is my Salvation and Destruction.
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Thu Feb 08, 2007 3:59 pm |
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DizaLove
Joined: 09 May 2007
Posts: 1
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I guess its time I chime in...
Raven, dear...
I began reading your story & become totally engrossed in it... I adore it! I hope you can return to finish it.
Thank you for sharing!
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Wed May 09, 2007 3:15 pm |
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