So my friend don't hesitate make every moment count
And live in the now
You gotta know that's what it's all about.
Sun Jan 12, 2014 8:03 pm
MysteryGirl Moderators
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
Hey,this one reads a bit like song lyrics Cindy T.....did you happen to have a tune in mind?
And if you don't mind me saying, I think the last word in the first verse would read better as 'top' rather than 'end', but that is just my opinion.
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Wed Jan 15, 2014 8:27 am
CindyT
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida
Thanks MG! No don't really have a tune in mind but if you are inclined feel free to tune it up! And thanks for the word note, I agree 'top' does sound better..
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