I'm new and eager for feedback.. have a lot to share
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RainbowKitty
Joined: 01 Oct 2004
Posts: 22
Location: Kansas City, MO
I'm new and eager for feedback.. have a lot to share
Constantly caressing my thoughts with satin touch found only you.
I long to tell you, to show you how my spirit needs you,
That I am ice melting at the thought of you, crackling and aching without you.
As I am now a puddle with nothing left to do but vaporize,
Every particle of my being wants to soak into you and become your loving heart.
Fear not, you'll never be alone, as I will always be water to quench your undieing thirst.
Fri Oct 01, 2004 2:04 am
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
I like your writing...hope to see more.
Dance~
Mon Oct 04, 2004 12:50 am
RainbowKitty
Joined: 01 Oct 2004
Posts: 22
Location: Kansas City, MO
Thank you. That's good to hear. I have so much more and I'm writing all the time. You'll see lots more when I have time to post it.
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