Joined: 18 Nov 2004
Posts: 290
Location: South Florida
Why?
Why
Why is my life like two pieces of a pie?
Its two pieces but its all I
Most see whom they want to see
But I can’t be who you want me to be
But why, if its all I?
Two pieces of a pie
You like one piece
Not the whole pie
But why, if its all I?
You want a scalpel
So you can carve
The perfect person
For who you are
But it is I
Two pieces of a pie
You want integration
You don't see my frustration
Why is my life like two pieces of a pie
Its two pieces but its all I
You want to love the parts you like
Will the rest you discard?
Why
When its all I
Two pieces of a pie
If you can’t take all
Then you’ll have none
You see it’s I,
Two pieces of one whole pie _________________ i love the scent of a womyn, the touch of a womyn, the taste of a womyn
Tue Jun 14, 2005 10:13 pm
wyldhart
Joined: 02 Dec 2004
Posts: 1216
awesome, Chame..babe...i too, believe, that we should always love the whole person..not just pieces that make up the whole. Sure..there might be a part or two that we aren't as fond of...but that's what makes us unique and special...
this is a excellent write with a truthful metaphor...
warmest hugs
wyld _________________ "wyld in the darkest places of your mind"
Tue Jun 14, 2005 11:55 pm
Linda Bray
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Posts: 4052
Chame,
Well my friend....I luv ya just like you are! Hugs to you my friend!
Love yassss,
Linda _________________ a poets heart is never empty....
Linda Bray
Wed Jun 15, 2005 12:08 am
chame70
Joined: 18 Nov 2004
Posts: 290
Location: South Florida
Why?
Wyld,
Thank You so much. Such a compliment from you is a GREAT HONOR. I'm well, kind of blushing.
Linda,
You know me a little bit so I know you understand and guess what?
I LUV u 2 my friend!
Hugs to both of You! You are both so GREAT!!!!!
chame _________________ i love the scent of a womyn, the touch of a womyn, the taste of a womyn
Wed Jun 15, 2005 12:23 am
SWAY
Joined: 14 Apr 2005
Posts: 1560
Location: Upstate NY
chame,
too true what wyld said, i agree. And i love you for all of you chica. Thank you for sharing yourself with us. Great write.
Hugs,
SWAY _________________ Giving myself to others has made me jaded...
Wed Jun 15, 2005 11:02 am
Happier Blue
Joined: 01 Feb 2005
Posts: 379
Why?
chame,
Your words beautifully capture a very essential part of our individuality. After reading this, I was reminded of something I wrote many, many (MANY!!!) years ago ...
how strange,
to think that
i
could live in peace.
i
who live in
pieces
chame, the truth we all know but are sometimes afraid to accept, is that we will never find inner peace until we can acknowledge our own wholeness; our beautiful uniqueness along with all the blemishes experience has given us.
Beautiful and thoughtful ... like you!!!
~Blue~
Fri Jun 17, 2005 1:06 pm
Linda Bray
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Posts: 4052
Chame,
I havent heard from you in a while...checkin in to make sure your okay....just PM me and let me know...okay. I miss you and am just concerned. I wish you well.
Hugs,
Linda _________________ a poets heart is never empty....
Linda Bray
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