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Imperfection

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lostsoul



Joined: 28 Mar 2005
Posts: 372
Imperfection

The rose does not excuse her thorn
nor angry bee his sting.

The tiger does not despise his stripes
nor lioness her lack of mane.

The sandy grain does not doubt its place
nor rock upon the shore.

Purpose, form, imperfection in all
left by the master's caress--
that lingered longer on my work
leaving purpose, form, imperfection
and likening me to Himself

Who am I to excuse, despise
or doubt his handiwork?
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Post Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:49 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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Lost,

I liked reading this.


Dance~

Post Fri Feb 03, 2006 1:53 pm 
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lostsoul



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Thanks Dance -

Best wishes to you and yours!
Lost
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Post Fri Feb 03, 2006 5:01 pm 
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SWAY



Joined: 14 Apr 2005
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Location: Upstate NY


lost,

this was a poem that made me look at myself differently...thank you.

SWAY
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Post Thu Feb 09, 2006 1:29 pm 
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lostsoul



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Sway

Thanks for the response...I am not quite happy with the form but the message hit me in an instant one morning. And it made me see myself differently as well.

Best--
Lost
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