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Aphrodite
Joined: 04 Oct 2005
Posts: 566
Location: Hot Springs Ar
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So shall it be
beautiful clouds hovering above
soft wind caressing your flesh
fingers seductively gliding your hair
whispers through the trees
calling, singing, summoning me
a soft glow as I sense her presence
invoking my entire being
I feel her entering me
beautiful music in my ears
as the wind blows
she speaks loud and clear
soft grass beloved ground
she reaches up
awakening all that is me
she calls to me as I reach down
my body is not my own
pulling me
guiding me
calling me
whispers in the wind
feeling her breath upon my face
all the pain now erased
a soft smile sweeping my face
my thoughts no longer my own
all I know
all I feel
all I breath
is she
my heart pounding
she reaches in
completley taking over me
limitless possibilities she shows me
seeing thru her eyes
love
beauty
passion
knowledge
all invoking me
so shall it be
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Mon Mar 27, 2006 2:06 am |
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Aphrodite
Joined: 04 Oct 2005
Posts: 566
Location: Hot Springs Ar
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Oh!! Im so hurt. You dont like this one? Lmao. Fine be that way ~exagerated fake pout~
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I have no fear
fear is the mind killer
I will face my fear, I will let it pass through me
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Sat Apr 01, 2006 8:00 am |
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realwoman
Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Posts: 1040
Location: under our tree in Africa
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Re: So shall it be
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Originally posted by Aphrodite:
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she reaches up
awakening all that is me
she calls to me as I reach down
my body is not my own
pulling me
guiding me
calling me
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Aph! I really loved this - and dont know HOW i could have missed it. I love the imagery - the setting, everyting - you created a brilliant picture here!
thanks for posting!
real
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Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:32 pm |
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Aphrodite
Joined: 04 Oct 2005
Posts: 566
Location: Hot Springs Ar
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Awwwwww. As always I can count on my sweet Real to give me a boost of confidence. Thank you love. In my humble opinion this is the best peice of writing I have ever done. Your kind words always a blessing.
((((((((((((((((((REAL)))))))))))))))))))))
Aph
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I have no fear
fear is the mind killer
I will face my fear, I will let it pass through me
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Sun Apr 02, 2006 8:14 am |
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Khaleesi
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Joined: 06 May 2005
Posts: 551
Location: FL
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Dearest Aph,
You know i read this and told you in an e-mail it was wonderful! But i'll say it again. This is beautiful.
slaveofMistress
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Never start a row in public when it can be settled politely in private. ~My Father~
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Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:24 am |
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ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
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quote:
Originally posted by Aphrodite:
Oh!! Im so hurt. You dont like this one? Lmao. Fine be that way ~exagerated fake pout~
LOL - aph, dear, i wasnt here to read it! but i agree with you - this is one of your very best.
regards and chin up
ghost
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Tue Apr 04, 2006 2:41 pm |
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Aphrodite
Joined: 04 Oct 2005
Posts: 566
Location: Hot Springs Ar
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tee hee hee. Ok. I feel loved again. and Slave.....
~blushing~ you of course know that I did not meen you!!! ~big kiss~
Thank you ladies. I absolutley love this one. The emotion I felt this day. Aye me...I wish it would never have faded and I crave to feel it again. It was the most phenominal moment in the history of my life.
Aph
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I have no fear
fear is the mind killer
I will face my fear, I will let it pass through me
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:12 am |
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