pale mist swirls
above furrowed ground
- hidden fields.
Sat Jul 24, 2004 12:37 am
a_beautiful_mind
Joined: 21 May 2004
Posts: 94
Cor you've certainly opened a door to my imagination!
Luv n stuff
a_beautiful_mind
Mon Jul 26, 2004 7:04 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
hey thanks
mel (wondering what your imagination holds....)
Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:18 pm
a_beautiful_mind
Joined: 21 May 2004
Posts: 94
Before I read this poem I'd been debating with a friend over curiosity being a sense or a feeling. Anyhow, we finally came to the conclusion that it was a sense. We decided that you couldn't be curious without being aware of the unknown blah blah blah. With all this still on my mind when reading this poem, it got me thinking twice as hard. Hope that makes sense
Luv n Stuff
a_beautiful_mind
Tue Jul 27, 2004 5:57 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
Yep, that makes perfect sense to me
Mel
Tue Jul 27, 2004 9:57 pm
a_beautiful_mind
Joined: 21 May 2004
Posts: 94
o X o
God, I love this Haiku! D'ya know, when writing at night and writers block decides to rear it ugly head ... this is moi cure! Well, 60% of the time
x
Fri Oct 22, 2004 1:56 pm
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
Very nice Mel
Dance~
Tue Oct 26, 2004 12:57 am
Tullia_1976
Joined: 01 Nov 2004
Posts: 414
Location: Canada
Made me think of the Hobbit. I love your Haiku. But then again I am very biased, I live in a very misty place. ~Tullia _________________ The only things to regret in life, are those you never attempted.
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Fri Nov 05, 2004 3:23 am
Linda Bray
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Posts: 4052
Mel,
Thank you! Great work! I hope your weekend is a good one!
Take good care.
Peace,
Linda _________________ a poets heart is never empty....
Linda Bray
Sun Dec 05, 2004 3:53 am
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
hey thanks Dance, Tullia and Linda
<----hoping you don't notice how long it took me to respond
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