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brokendeserthrt

Joined: 14 Jun 2006
Posts: 18

rumi musings and you

rumi musings and you

i am
origami
creations defined
by the haunting
of your hands

©sdt03/06
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Sun Jul 23, 2006 11:43 pm

DanceofSorrows

Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837

Broken,

This among other works here at mels are pretty cool, especially with the creative format in your other works. Welcome.

Dance~

Mon Jul 24, 2006 3:56 am

ms.deidre

Joined: 09 Jul 2006
Posts: 52
Location: Arlington, Va

by folds and creases,
ghosts of your hands.

eh, just a thought.

-Deidre
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 11:24 pm

brokendeserthrt

Joined: 14 Jun 2006
Posts: 18

quote:
Originally posted by ms.deidre:
by folds and creases,
ghosts of your hands.

eh, just a thought.

-Deidre

deidre, run with your thought,
and let it grow.
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 11:38 pm

ms.deidre

Joined: 09 Jul 2006
Posts: 52
Location: Arlington, Va

origami

by folds and creases
i retrace your fingers' force
itch for forms
you'll shape in me
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 11:56 pm

brokendeserthrt

Joined: 14 Jun 2006
Posts: 18

Re: origami

quote:
Originally posted by ms.deidre:
by folds and creases
i retrace your fingers' force
itch for forms
you'll shape in me

i'm really happy and touched
that my words could inspire you.

thank you for sharing.
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Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:21 pm

Eiregirl

Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

Rumi is cool

Eiregirl

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Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:54 pm

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