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I See...

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sapphodyte69



Joined: 21 Nov 2006
Posts: 25
 		I See...
My eyes are filled
with her beauty...
Her eyes, the windows
of her soul.
Majestic pools reflecting
the passions of her being...
Love, hate, anger, peace
fear and pain.

Her lips...
Soft, sweet, sensuous
islands of pleasure.
Like a bolt of lightening
they flash a smile, so hot
that I feel my soul explode,
like the fireworks
on the fourth of July.

In the sunset,
I see her solitude.
In the trees,
her serenity.
In the rain
her tears.

In the flowers,
I smell her essence.
In the wind,
I hear her laughter.

In the morning,
she is my sunshine.
In the evening,
my stars.

Day in...
Day out...
her love guides me.

When I falter,
I see her smile.
I know
that the love I feel
from her smile
will keep me going.
With her love,
I know,
til my dying day
I will be complete

Post Tue Nov 28, 2006 4:57 am 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

sappho,

That is a lovely write, thank you for sharing it with us.

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Post Tue Nov 28, 2006 4:11 pm 
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sapphodyte69



Joined: 21 Nov 2006
Posts: 25
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Dear Eiregirl

Thank you for your kind words. It is a blessing to have others to share my writings with. I appreciate the compliments as well as the constructive criticism I have received.

Don't be afraid of hurting my feelings with the tructh because this is a learning experience that I need guidance on. I've never had a writing class and I know some of my writings are very cluttered with elementary mistakes. I also take joy in my endeavors when someone compliments them.

Thanx again.

Melissa Laughing

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