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IN YOUR CAR

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lori



Joined: 19 Aug 2007
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 		IN YOUR CAR

 IN YOUR CAR

Although im very very far
i still remember in your car
your sudden laughs
your little smiles
as we travelled miles n miles
just besotted so i was
staring at you
just because
you were happy
full of fun
brightened rainy days
like sun
little outbursts
laughs and song
making me glad
to belong
to the sweetest
girl i know
god how much i love you so.

Lori x
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WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..

Post Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:07 pm 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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lori,

Wonderful and full of joy Very Happy

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geordie_sooey



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Location: Manchester, England 		Carefree Times..

 What a lovely, carefree piece - thanks for sharing Smile
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Roman



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Lori -
Very wonderful piece!!
When I started reading this it reminded me of Tracy Chapman's song..."Fast Car"
You have amazing talent hun!
You keep writing and I'll keep reading!!
~Cheers, Jack
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desert-fish



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lovely Very Happy
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lori



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thanks guys x
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quote:
Originally posted by lori:
thanks guys x


ehem....ladies you mean Very Happy
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lori



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i mean guys. i call ladies guys too Laughing i am Scottish and its is our way. Does not mean i see women as men. Wink
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quote:
Originally posted by lori:
i mean guys. i call ladies guys too Laughing i am Scottish and its is our way. Does not mean i see women as men. Wink


knew that just felt like teazing you sum Wink
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lori



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ok Wink
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trusting fool



Joined: 09 Aug 2007
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Location: um illinois but longing for new york

very sweet lori Wink
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Capriccio



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Oh that's sweet. I go for miles with my darling, head on her shoulder, eyes closed, bliss
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Capriccio



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By the way, she's driving, not me!!
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lori



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lol Laughing
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Capriccio



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Well you never know, there might have been a misunderstanding, don't want to set a bad example. Laughing

But a silly fantasy of mine is to have one of those lovely classic cars with a bench front seat so that I could sit right next to her. Nowadays we'd need a seat belt but that needn't be a problem.

Also, showing such affection in the car is a way of expressing feelings in public in a way that could be difficult outside. It's such a sad fact of same-sex love that it can't be shown publicly in the same way as it can for hetero couples. I so often want to snuggle up to my darling woman, hold her, kiss her as I could if with a man. Maybe we should have more courage, or simply give in to emotion as the impulse takes us.
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