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Lucise

Joined: 11 Sep 2007
Posts: 46
Location: Canada

One Language

it is two souls
two cosmic lines
two spirits
it is a dance on a higher plane

it is magnificence
a work of art
a blessing
it is divine

it is intricacy
a set of weaving paths
like arteries and veins
one source, one destination- the heart

it is human
confused at times
imperfect by nature
yet able to grow, to blossom

it is home
a warm hearth
a welcome sanctuary
it is hope at the very least

that’s what love is

so I guess what I really need to know
is why you judge me and my lover so
when we seek what you seek:
Love – one language we all speak.

it is supreme
across tribes and races
beyond vast continents of land and sea
it is gender-free

what does it matter that he’s male like me
or that not unlike me, she sits down to pee?
I guess I really need to know
why you throw your crushing blow

would you be pleased to know I am sore
from all the pain and hatred you bore?
I only seek what you seek:
love – one language we all speak.

©Lucise 2007

Last edited by Lucise on Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:47 am; edited 1 time in total

Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:25 am

Eiregirl

Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

Lucise,

Hugs you tight

Eiregirl

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Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:44 am

lori

Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454

excellent write Lucise. Wink

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WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..

Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:16 pm

Lucise

Joined: 11 Sep 2007
Posts: 46
Location: Canada

Hey Lori! Cheers for reading!

*Waves at Eiregirl again* Wink

Tue Sep 11, 2007 5:19 pm

Ophelia

Joined: 24 May 2007
Posts: 464
Location: The Tower

lucise , an amazing, well-written poem, you have said in your poem
what so very many people feel in their hearts, the anguish, and the hope,
the desire to love & be loved without judgement...

forever & ever amen.

Exclamation

Wed Sep 12, 2007 12:39 am

Lucise

Joined: 11 Sep 2007
Posts: 46
Location: Canada

Hello Ophelia - Smile

Thank you for reading.
You said it well:

quote:
the desire to love & be loved without judgement...

forever & ever amen.

Wed Sep 12, 2007 4:19 am

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