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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
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Watch Me
this smoke...
screen is
nothing compared
to your
vanishing tricks
my strutting is
nothing compared
to the spiritual licks
you give to the right side
of my head
breaking me down is
nothing compared
to what i want
to do you
instead
give me that
challenging smile again
give me that
commitment phobic line
you've rehearsed
a thousand times
give me the
impossible
the most illogical
of doubts
and
watch me
squash them in my
healing hands
watch me
turn your fears
into the sand dune
of time
watch me
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'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
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Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:05 pm |
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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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I really like this. I like the strength and confidence here.
Cat
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If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Alpenglow
Joined: 02 Feb 2007
Posts: 607
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dRED
Joined: 07 Apr 2007
Posts: 401
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((((((((((((((((K))))))))))))))))))
Hmm who could resist not to watch? Such a lovely piece. It evokes so much emotions and mirrors the likes of which I have never felt before (you for your G and me for my Shams, of course).
Proufound! that's what it is.
Gel
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realwoman
Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Posts: 1040
Location: under our tree in Africa
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(((((((((((((((((((((((((K))))))))))))))))))))))
Absolutely stunning, my friend, it made me smile, and you know which smile that was...
Love,
~real
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light is to darkness as love is to fear...
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