Love, such a strange and powerful thing
Unconditional, uncontrollable, undeniable
In your heart, the burning feeling is so alive
Unbelievable, yet sometimes...unbearable.
I loved her truly, I loved her deeply
I loved while hurting for so very long
My heart was alive, happy yet sad
I thought I had found where I belonged.
But love, as I found,
Isn't always forever.
Like made up in fairytales,
Never apart, yet together.
But it doesn't always work
It's not always ok
Love doesn't always live
Love doesn't always stay
So naive, I thought she was
The girl I belonged to, my one sweetheart.
But now I'll let go, and now I'll move on
Now I'll begin love again, at the very start. _________________ Whoever said the path to love had to be straight?
Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:01 pm
lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
awww how sad. its a fact though that love dont always hang around..... however, true love comes back.... sometimes. _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
Welcome to Mels and thanks for sharing this poem. Love...such a complex emotion.
Hugs,
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:47 pm
BabyVampy
Joined: 30 Oct 2007
Posts: 5
Thanks for the comments guys:)
What part of eire u from? I'm from cork!x _________________ Whoever said the path to love had to be straight?
quote:Originally posted by BabyVampy:
Thanks for the comments guys:)
What part of eire u from? I'm from cork!x
Bre` Wicklow county _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Fri Nov 02, 2007 3:27 am
BabyVampy
Joined: 30 Oct 2007
Posts: 5
Cool! go eire:p _________________ Whoever said the path to love had to be straight?
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