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Give this a try.. [F]

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njk13



Joined: 07 Dec 2007
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 		Give this a try.. [F]

 I love you so much it makes me sad
Everytime I think about you leaving it makes me mad
I do everything I can
But you always want some man
You say you love me and we are meant to be,
When will you open your damn eyes and see
That in all reality you don’t really care
Im sorry I just cannot share
All of those losers left you alone
Treated you like a dog and you fetched their bones
I want to do every little thing for you
Let them be on their own, and try something new
You have 3 kids that I adore
Everytime I see them it makes me cry more
I want you to be in my life
If I could I would make you my wife
You’re my best friend, my love, and my forever
Can we try things without saying never
I can’t take it much more
I cry so much it makes me sore
I want you and only you
Sometimes you just make me so blue
On this note, lets end it nice
We are like salt and pepper with extra spice
It doesn’t matter what people say
God made us different in every way
So if loving a girl is so wrong
Than I hope I don’t live to long


I will love you FOREVER Sharon Nicole!



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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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njk13,

Welcome to Mels Smile

That is a very nice poem that shows your feelings well. I especially like those last two lines...

"So if loving a girl is so wrong
Than I hope I don’t live to long"

Although you might want to change "Than" to "Then" Smile

Very nice and I like it

Hugs,
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True love is never wrong...

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