Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific
Mauve
You have no idea
what your presence do to me
it makes me want to smile
and laugh out with glee
I forget all else
when I see you
the world as I know it
cease to exist
You have no idea
what your subtle teasing do to me
it makes me want to crawl out of my shell
and play along like no one else is there
I banter a lot I know
if only to mask the feelings
I'm careful not to show
because the time just isn't right
I don't want you to scamper away
and take flight
there's enough time
my patience has no bound
My feelings for you
resembles a candle
that would burn throughout
my sweet lavender
So just have patience with me
soon I'd let you in on my little secret
soon my intentions you'll see
but for now let's keep it as it is
Let's hide behind this clandestine
and dance around each other
like silly honeybees
until the time is right… I'd let you in on my secret, under the moonlight _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
Thu Apr 19, 2007 7:31 pm
debut
Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 64
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Such wonderful feelings of love permeate your words...wonderfully done
Hugs,
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Fri Apr 20, 2007 1:07 am
dRED1
Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific
quote:Originally posted by debut:
The warm feeling of slowly emerging emotions.
Beautifully written Gel.
Hugs you, Debut
Deb,
Thank you
Hugs,
Gel _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:05 am
dRED1
Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific
quote:Originally posted by Eiregirl:
Ravenhair,
Such wonderful feelings of love permeate your words...wonderfully done
Hugs,
Eiregirl
Eire,
Thank you so very much for the kind words, your comment never fails to make me smile it's very much appreciated.
Hugs,
Gel _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:06 am
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
Well, what else can I say? you know me too well! Thanks so very much for reading and commenting, it means a lot to me.
Hugs,
Gel _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
Fri Apr 20, 2007 8:10 am
Fernanda.F.Rocha
Joined: 17 Aug 2006
Posts: 1392
Location: Portugal
((((((((((((((((Gel))))))))))))))))))
I have to agree with K
Soooo sweet writing
Hugsss
Fernanda _________________ "We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are" - Anais Nin.
Fri Apr 20, 2007 10:33 am
dRED1
Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific
quote:Originally posted by Fernanda.F.Rocha:
((((((((((((((((Gel))))))))))))))))))
I have to agree with K
Soooo sweet writing
Hugsss
Fernanda
(((((((((Fernanda))))))))))))
Thank you I hope the one I wrote it for thinks so too...
Hugs,
Gel _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
Fri Apr 20, 2007 10:53 am
joanie
Joined: 26 Aug 2006
Posts: 123
Location: Florida
Beautiful!
The words of an emerging dance!
Well done my friend!
J _________________ "Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
Fri Apr 20, 2007 1:06 pm
sensual
Joined: 05 Feb 2007
Posts: 313
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:52 pm
dRED1
Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific
quote:Originally posted by joanie:
Beautiful!
The words of an emerging dance!
Well done my friend!
J
J,
Thank you
Hugs,
Gel _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
Wed Jun 13, 2007 3:12 pm
dRED1
Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific
quote:Originally posted by sensual:
Patience is a virtue for sure Gel.
Hugs, Sens
Sensis,
It is indeed! Thank you
Hugs,
Gel _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
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