That is a lovely poem and I really love the first two lines...actually I love the whole thing
Hugs,
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Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:41 am
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B,
All the different shades of red confuse me, but maybe I'm just missing the point.
I particularly like the cadence of "behind the ripening cedar".
~Eilidh
Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:52 pm
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Re: Winter Verse [F]
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