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BdeCaunteton
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
Posts: 955
Location: Iowa City, IA
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... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
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Raven
Joined: 20 Jan 2005
Posts: 1409
Location: Basking in the Garden
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I love this because your words created a lovely picture - enough so that I can see her right there my minds eye but you withheld enough that it's almost teasing this poem. I want to know more about this mess of a prima donna. I'm not even sure if I like her or dislike her but I am most assuredly intrigued. And that's all do to your excellent writing. Well done chica.
Kisses,
Rave _________________ Love is my Salvation and Destruction.
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MdmPrez
Joined: 16 Oct 2007
Posts: 803
Location: US of A
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Rose
This is great!
Like Raven said, I'm not sure I like her in the end, but in the beginning I thought she was wonderful. Good write!!!
Cat
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Eilidh
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Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
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Haha, Rose.
You have obviously met my cat, who knows he is truly a princess. He stares in the mirror at his own reflection for hours!
Nice write.
~Eilidh
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