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devil_angel_love



Joined: 11 May 2008
Posts: 103
 		perfection

 Perfection

One day on my walk through life I found
The most perfect of places
The most beautiful little corner where nothing is wrong
The grass is like silk against my skin
The leaves from a willow tree brushing the ground
I lay in the grass
Look up through the leaves
Beautiful
I could lay there for hours
To stare at her
Her skin shines through the leaves,
Makes me smile
All I want is to lay with her,
Perfection
My safe little corner
I am content to stay here
Without warning the scene changes
The willow runs
Her branches swaying as she escapes
A rabbit’s flight from a hunter
The world plunges into darkness
Her memory remains
Her perfection haunts me
So close was I to the haven of her arms
To her sweet caress
It’s all gone now
I’m left alone to the unforgiving darkness
She’s in my heart
An ever burning flame to keep the sorrow at bay
I sit in the grass waiting for the day that she comes back to me
My perfection
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when she smiles, the rain stops and all is right with the world.
Post Sun May 11, 2008 7:41 am 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

devil_angel_love,

Welcome to Mels Smile

Enjoyed reading the poem...thanks for sharing it

Hugs,
Eiregirl Arrow
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Post Mon May 12, 2008 12:42 am 
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devil_angel_love



Joined: 11 May 2008
Posts: 103

Eiregirl

Thank you! I already like it here and I'm really glad you liked the poem. Thanks for stopping by. As for sharing, this site makes it easy and less stressful for me so I'm happy to do it:)

D-A-L
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desert-fish



Joined: 13 Apr 2006
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sad but langorous poem dal....i enjoyed reading it....like a day-dream it was Very Happy
Post Mon May 12, 2008 12:39 pm 
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devil_angel_love



Joined: 11 May 2008
Posts: 103

Solo,

Laughing I'm glad you liked it. I never thought of it like a daydream but now that I look at it, that's exactly what it's like Laughing I think I need better glasses.

dal
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