Joined: 09 Feb 2008
Posts: 11
Location: Michigan, USA
Surrender (F)
I surrender unto you my life,
my breath, my body, my soul.
I give you these in return
for one fleeting moment to bask in your gaze,
to feel your eyes upon my flesh.
To feel your skin pressed upon mine,
to hear your words, uttered softly,
meant only for me.
So, take my life, my breath,
my body, my soul,
for without you they are meaningless.
The true expression of how it feels to be utterly in love.
Wonderfully done
Hugs,
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Mon Jul 14, 2008 1:57 am
sera
Joined: 04 Jun 2008
Posts: 21
when love has consumed us like this...we have touched grace...beautifully written
Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:49 am
Celtgoddess
Joined: 09 Feb 2008
Posts: 11
Location: Michigan, USA
Thank You both, so much. I have truthfully never felt the way I feel about her before...she elicits such emotion.
Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:01 pm
Angel1 Moderators
Joined: 09 Mar 2007
Posts: 1518
Location: U.K
((((((((celticgoddess))))))))
this poem is just Beautiful,making for a wonderful , heartwarming read. Thank you so much for sharing.
((((((hugs)))))
Angel1 x
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