Below the starlight
you and I have tonight
please dont waste time
we dont have time to waste
tonight is our last night
before we go our separate ways
a pity this is our last
but what ever really lasts
under the stars so bright
we have a final night
at least our paths crossed
though romeo and juliet never knew our loss
lets feel everything in one night
lets feel everything tonight _________________ Smile now, Cry Later
Last edited by Jesika on Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:40 am; edited 2 times in total
I think the first word of the 11th line should be "at" instead of "as"
Hugs,
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Tue Jul 22, 2008 3:22 am
Jesika
Joined: 21 Jan 2008
Posts: 21
thank you erie and you were right dang typos lol _________________ Smile now, Cry Later
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