It’s in your eyes, she said. Your eyes, she said.
It’s in your eyes, she said.
Your eyes.
How they shimmer, she said.
They shimmer, she said.
They shimmer, they glimmer, they gleam.
Those who do not look will never see
What stories those eyes do tell.
Skirts long and flowing, tresses a’shining,
But those eyes,
Look away.
Invoke visions celestial
Of lands ancient yore.
But minds cannot hold,
Hands are not here.
Sing heartsongs sacred,
Weave fiery dances.
Free your Truth.
Be here.
Sun Jun 05, 2011 6:32 pm
MysteryGirl Moderators
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This piece invoked beautiful haunting images Eilidh, like the kind we see when looking into a fire.
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Sun Jun 05, 2011 11:29 pm
MdmPrez
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Well Done!!! I agree, it's in the eyes.
Cat
Sun Jun 05, 2011 11:52 pm
Eilidh Moderators
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Posts: 1880
(((((MG & Cat)))))
Thank you both. Perhaps it's in the eyes of the fire?
~Eilidh
Mon Jun 06, 2011 11:39 pm
EverydayAngelKarie
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Location: Lakewood, CA
this is a great poem
Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:03 am
Eilidh Moderators
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Thank you, Eda. It's been a while since I've written something worth posting.
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