Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
clarity
she wrote smooth
like ripples free-flowing
through the surface of a river
after a pebble is tossed
by an uncaring hand
belonging to the child
who is homewrecked
like a stray puppy
barking at the mailman
wearing blue
like it was the color of God
who graced her with her talent
so that she could write so smooth
Tue May 31, 2011 7:29 pm
MysteryGirl Moderators
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
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Location: I come from a land downunder
I like the form of this Eda, the way beginning becomes end become beginning.
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Tue May 31, 2011 10:51 pm
EverydayAngelKarie
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