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combatbaby



Joined: 11 Nov 2006
Posts: 376
Location: Ontario 		Self

 I'm a haiku
With the wrong number
of Syllables

Without guidelines
Liberated chaos
Perfectly flawed

Lacking your rules
Free from restrictions
I find myself
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Post Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:38 pm 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

Combat,

Very nice and cleverly written.

If it does not follow the rules of Haiku...is it truely Haiku achoo Wink

Hugs,
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scruples



Joined: 28 Jan 2007
Posts: 151
Location: Long Island, NY 		On "Self"

 I haven't seen any poem like this. This is pretty neat.
Actually, I've been trying out Haiku as you know probably, and
I find if I stay with the syllables its more liberating since my mind
is all over the place anyway when doing poetry. Nice piece though. Cool
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