Joined: 22 Mar 2007
Posts: 74
Location: Gt.Manchester UK
becky
Just before I open my eyes
And my mind begins to wake
Leaving dreams behind on my pillow
I remember that you are next to me
The morning sun luminating your hair through my eyelids
And for a moment I want to stay here forever with my eyes closed tight
With you in my arms
Then I think I want to open them and see you!
But don’t want to break the warm sleeping bubble
And awaken you
Don't want the days demands creeping in on our slumber
Crawling under the covers
Do I keep them closed, or do I peep open?
I can smell you and no longer can resist I need to see your face
And there you are, peaceful and breathing deep
Every morning when I awake with you, you take my breath away with your softness
And the feeling that I just want to sink into you enlopes me
As the hour tugs at my feet I uncurl us from each other
You stir and frown pulling me back close and as I kiss you goodbye
And your arms curl back into your body
I don't think you quite know that you take my heart back into slumber with you
Held safely against your breast
Kept warm with your sighs
I wish you a good day my dear
Secretly knowing
All day to you I'll be near
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
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Fri Mar 23, 2007 3:35 am
smart_cookie
Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA
That's really sweet...lovely. I actually read "Becky II" first and searched to find this. I especially like the last few lines.
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Thu Apr 12, 2007 2:18 pm
flosspot24
Joined: 22 Mar 2007
Posts: 74
Location: Gt.Manchester UK
I edited it but not sure if I lost it.
Thank you very much for your comments and also smart cookie, I respect your poetry you write some wonderful stuff, some makes me laugh to so I feel quite honoured to ahve such nice comments from yourself!
Just before I open my eyes,
My mind begins to wake,
Leaving dreams behind on my pillow,
I remember that you are next to me.
The morning sun luminates your hair through my eyelids
And for a moment I want to stay here forever with my eyes closed tight
With you in my arms.
But its too much to bear and I need to open them and look at you!
But I don’t want to break the warm sleeping bubble
And awaken your gentleness.
I Don't want the days demands creeping in on our slumber,
Crawling under the covers,
Do I keep my eyes closed, or do I peep open?
I can smell you and no longer can resist I need to see your face,
And there you are!
Peaceful and breathing deep.
Every morning when I awake with you, you take my breath away with your softness,
And the feeling that I just want to sink into you envelops me,
As the hour tugs at my feet I uncurl us from each other,
You stir and frown pulling me back close,
My heart aches as I sadly kiss you goodbye,
Leaving your empty arms to curl back into your body without me.
You don’t know that you take my heart back into slumber with you,
Freely stolen,
Held safely against your breast
Kept warm with your sighs
I wish you a good day my dear
Secretly knowing
All day to you I'll be near
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