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joanie
Joined: 26 Aug 2006
Posts: 123
Location: Florida
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Touch
TOUCH
From across the ocean
You touch
Your words to your friend
You touch
Your concern and love
You touch
My life
You’ve touched
Joy and encouragement
You’ve touched
Awaking a new passion
You’ve touched
A heart once broken
You’re touching
The place where smiles grow
You’re touching
A life on empty
You’re touching
A gentle soul
Have you been touched?
A kind heart
Have you been touched?
A lost girl
Have you been touched? _________________ "Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
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BdeCaunteton
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
Posts: 955
Location: Iowa City, IA
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Re: Touch
... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
www[dot]bdecauntetonspoetry[dot]webs[dot]com
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joanie
Joined: 26 Aug 2006
Posts: 123
Location: Florida
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THANK YOU HUN!
J _________________ "Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
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joanie
Joined: 26 Aug 2006
Posts: 123
Location: Florida
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Eire
Thank you!
Hugs
J _________________ "Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
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dRED1
Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific
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J,
That's a very lovely poem... sometimes we meet people that touch our lives and sees through us more than others do... keep writing...
Hugs,
Gel _________________ me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~
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joanie
Joined: 26 Aug 2006
Posts: 123
Location: Florida
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quote:
Originally posted by Ravenhairedgal:
J,
That's a very lovely poem... sometimes we meet people that touch our lives and sees through us more than others do... keep writing...
Hugs,
Gel
Gel
Yes we do! Thank you!
Hugs
J _________________ "Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
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desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted
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rabbit89
Joined: 28 Jun 2007
Posts: 1
Location: dacula,ga
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hey girl yo poem is hawt _________________ ~mrz.poet iz here~
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Allison
Joined: 12 Oct 2005
Posts: 4216
Location: Florida
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Way to go Joanie. I was pleasantly surprised to find this very sweet poem. Great write my friend.
Alli _________________ Alli
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sensual
Joined: 05 Feb 2007
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