love is friendship,
set to music
my favorite quote,
now but a memory of moist cheeks
and lonely nights
love is friendship
we let it grow,
i was so lucky
so fortunate,
i didnt understand
love is friendship
thats how it started
an unbreakable bond
an unbreakable trust
now broken, shattered and sore
love is friendship
that was set to a beautiful melody
and now i cant hear it anymore
i want our hearts to heal,
to find that golden thread
not to fix, but work through
i want the music back
without the music,
my life is so silent, so mute
i cant hear myself cry
my world is cold and disjointed
so play me a tune,
and dance my way
i promise to love you
i promise to change
i know what we are
and i know what we can be
so please, please, please,
bring the music back to me. _________________ *love is friendship set to music...*
That is a wonderful poem...I love it. Thank you very much for sharing it.
Magnificient
Hugs,
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
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Thu May 31, 2007 3:02 am
chordphrute
Joined: 04 Jul 2005
Posts: 1412
Location: Nouvelle Orléans, Louisiane
Jings, cutie pie... I like this poem. What works is that all the lines aren't exactly the same length, the broken stanzas, and the theme throughout. "Golden Thread"...nice. _________________ "You can't kiss and keep your eyes open, they'll cross forever" - Rubyfruit Jungle
Tue Nov 20, 2007 2:20 pm
lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
awwww how sad. very nice write. _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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