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A Year or so on....

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geordie_sooey



Joined: 11 Aug 2007
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Location: Manchester, England
A Year or so on....

You ever have that feeling...
Almost a sickness in your stomach.
Overwhelming desire
Could even be described as a need.

You want to take her for granted.
Because you so hope this is forever...
That there will never again be a new beginning.
To relax into the abyss that is 'lifetime lovers'

But to relax may be to pay less attention
And risk those special moments becoming less frequent.
Like catching the glint in her eye across the room..
Or the touch of your breast against her as you pass

Those long, slow, tender kisses...
Silent, barely breathing, consuming....savouring.
Gradually emotions forcing the blood to rush.
The softness of her lips etched onto yours

A gift so precious and rare
Must be nurtured, tended and cared for.
More so even than the most delicate orchid.
To assume it will just grow, and flourish - would be foolish.


To feel the way that you do is perfect.
It is natural and right to be afriad of losing
that which is most special; which lights up your world.
Hold her in your arms, brush her cheek with your fingertips

Allow yourself to show her, to share the emotions within.
Don't be put off, love never pushed anyone away.
That fear you both feel can be smothered, and replaced by fulfillment.
The sharing of hopes, and of dreams, and a future so perfect.

Together, hand in hand...hearts and minds interlinked.
It all becomes so easy.
That laughter and temptation, once again paving the way.
To your lifetime together - which is only some small steps away.
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Post Sat Aug 11, 2007 9:05 am 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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geordie,

Welcome to Mels and thank you for sharing your poetry with us

This is a very lovely and sweet write

Hugs,
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Post Sun Aug 12, 2007 3:28 am 
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geordie_sooey



Joined: 11 Aug 2007
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Location: Manchester, England


thankyou x
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trusting fool



Joined: 09 Aug 2007
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Location: um illinois but longing for new york


geordie, these words can be so true sometimes thank you for sharing this Smile
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Post Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:00 am 
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Roman



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Geordie -
Very well said indeed!!
Great write sweetie!
~Cheers, Jack
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Capriccio



Joined: 24 Apr 2006
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I feel every word of that, and I know my darling does too. Thank you so much Geordie

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geordie_sooey



Joined: 11 Aug 2007
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thanks cap....x
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