Joined: 09 Aug 2007
Posts: 91
Location: um illinois but longing for new york
I just might
I think they may be right,
I think it may be true.
I think that I just might,
Be falling for you.
I'm sure I've felt this way before,
I'm just trying to hold it back.
But when you show up at my door,
Control is something i lack.
Your eyes, your nose,
Your smile, your face.
Those lips slightly closed,
I long just to taste. _________________ pouring over photographs, i'm living in your letters, breathing deeply from this envelope it smells like you, and i can't live without that scent.-Dashboard Confessional
Hugs,
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Tue Aug 21, 2007 5:19 am
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
trusting,
How does the song go? ... I wish I may / I wish I might / Have this wish / I wish tonight ...
Your poem reminded me of these lyrics. This is a very sweet write. Nice work.
~Eilidh
Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:07 pm
trusting fool
Joined: 09 Aug 2007
Posts: 91
Location: um illinois but longing for new york
Eire thank you i'm glad you liked it[/quote] _________________ pouring over photographs, i'm living in your letters, breathing deeply from this envelope it smells like you, and i can't live without that scent.-Dashboard Confessional
Tue Aug 21, 2007 5:01 pm
trusting fool
Joined: 09 Aug 2007
Posts: 91
Location: um illinois but longing for new york
Eilidh, ya the song is something like that. i'm glad you liked it thank you _________________ pouring over photographs, i'm living in your letters, breathing deeply from this envelope it smells like you, and i can't live without that scent.-Dashboard Confessional
Tue Aug 21, 2007 5:03 pm
desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted
likes it but isn't feeling loquacious again.....
sigh...don't know what's got into me lately
Sat Sep 01, 2007 6:28 pm
trusting fool
Joined: 09 Aug 2007
Posts: 91
Location: um illinois but longing for new york
i understand solo but thank you for reading this and liking it _________________ pouring over photographs, i'm living in your letters, breathing deeply from this envelope it smells like you, and i can't live without that scent.-Dashboard Confessional
Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:21 pm
Capriccio
Joined: 24 Apr 2006
Posts: 19
Location: sw england
Risking that first kiss, trusting not to be rejected - but we both knew deep down that we could take that risk. And that gentle tender kiss has transformed our lives.
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