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lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
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IN YOUR CAR
IN YOUR CAR
Although im very very far
i still remember in your car
your sudden laughs
your little smiles
as we travelled miles n miles
just besotted so i was
staring at you
just because
you were happy
full of fun
brightened rainy days
like sun
little outbursts
laughs and song
making me glad
to belong
to the sweetest
girl i know
god how much i love you so.
Lori x _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:07 pm |
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geordie_sooey
Joined: 11 Aug 2007
Posts: 14
Location: Manchester, England
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Carefree Times..
What a lovely, carefree piece - thanks for sharing _________________ The Greatest Glory in living lies not in never falling, but in rising everytime we fall...
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 7:00 pm |
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Roman
Joined: 24 Jun 2005
Posts: 3187
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Lori -
Very wonderful piece!!
When I started reading this it reminded me of Tracy Chapman's song..."Fast Car"
You have amazing talent hun!
You keep writing and I'll keep reading!!
~Cheers, Jack _________________ © Copywrite 1998 - 2015
~ Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me ~
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Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:52 am |
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desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted
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lovely
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Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:02 am |
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lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
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thanks guys x _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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Sun Aug 26, 2007 4:25 pm |
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desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted
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quote:
Originally posted by lori:
thanks guys x
ehem....ladies you mean
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:35 pm |
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Capriccio
Joined: 24 Apr 2006
Posts: 19
Location: sw england
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Oh that's sweet. I go for miles with my darling, head on her shoulder, eyes closed, bliss
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Mon Sep 03, 2007 9:16 am |
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Capriccio
Joined: 24 Apr 2006
Posts: 19
Location: sw england
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By the way, she's driving, not me!!
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Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:31 am |
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