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Chill
Joined: 04 Jan 2005
Posts: 14
Location: among the potatoes
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Absolute Zero
Absolute Zero
Ummmmmm….
I always wanted to be a wasteful writer,
To have the authority to throw words out,
And to remove no power from the piece.
To possess the liberal eloquence
Required to animate a
Flat
Audience.
To portray
To become
One
With myself.
To understand
Ultimates.
To become
A culture creator.
One who moves a
Society with complete
Artistry.
To understand
Face value
But,
Fathoms deep.
To create
Expressions of infinity...
Poetry.
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Wed Jan 05, 2005 9:37 pm |
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cmichelle1119
Joined: 11 Nov 2004
Posts: 879
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I just have to tell you this is awesome!!Excellent write hun,keep it up!!
Hugs
~*~Michelle~*~
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Fri Jan 07, 2005 4:47 am |
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Linda Bray
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Posts: 4052
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Chill,
Well I believe your request has been answered....you have truly created a masterpiece here. Wonderful write!!! Thank you for allowing us to read your work. I wish you a wonderful weekend.
Peace,
Linda
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Linda Bray
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Fri Jan 07, 2005 11:01 pm |
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herwriter
Joined: 08 Feb 2005
Posts: 19
Location: kentucky
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Re: Absolute Zero
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Originally posted by Chill:
Absolute Zero
A culture creator.
One who moves a
Society with complete
Artistry.
Chill,
I especially enjoyed this part of your poem. I think all poets strive for this same goal in one manner or another.
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A poet is always seeking the beauty of the world.
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Wed Feb 09, 2005 12:19 am |
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Chill
Joined: 04 Jan 2005
Posts: 14
Location: among the potatoes
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Aww Gee, thanks:)
It's always nice to have your work appreciated.
I've been so busy these days that i haven't bee nable to come and have a looksee with new material. i was sure this one would be lost in the shuffle somewhere.
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Wed Mar 30, 2005 3:17 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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Chill,
Girl I love this!!! Thanks for sharing it~
Dance~
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Wed Mar 30, 2005 7:01 pm |
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lilriotgrrrl
Joined: 23 Mar 2005
Posts: 108
Location: hawaii
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damn, that was an awesome write. you are wonderful in your words.
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Thu Mar 31, 2005 1:44 am |
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slippingaway
Joined: 05 Jun 2007
Posts: 37
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Wow, Chill this is such an awsome amazing write! Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Kat
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Don't ask yourself what the world needs. Ask yourself what makes you come alive, and go do that, because what the world needs is people who have come alive. -Howard Thurman
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