I could see a willow tree on the banks of a stream with it drooping branches and leaves being stung by a hard warm rain.
wonderful write
hugs,
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Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:59 am
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Haiku is a fun form, isn't it? I have a paperback that is comprised wholly of haikus written by children, and they are just amazing!
"beautiful rosebud
please open your heart and bloom
why are you so shy?"
(written by Andrea Bahr, age 6)
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lovely imagery in so few words there Alpen! i can picture that tree crying. i have a friend who says trees remind her of people. _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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