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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
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In time
The heat of your breath felt on the base of my neck
Shhhhhh. Kkkkk. Shhhhhh
The tip of your nose draws an imaginary line, along my spine
What. Next. What.
The pulsating tingling exuding from your fingertips, find my own
Beat. Stop. Beat.
i have found my way but yet i am not quite home
i have found the immortal in mortality and i...
can barely speak for finding...
barely move for feeling
i suspend all time by
being in time and
on time
i am..
here
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Last edited by fortheloveofagood... on Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:22 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Crazy4her28
Joined: 30 Jan 2008
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Lovely poem, very exotic and you can really feel what your saying. I love it!
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fortheloveofagood...
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thank you, for feeling it, and replying.
Kx
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'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
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poeticrendezvous
Joined: 15 Dec 2007
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ok that tingled lol....
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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
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Location: loves land of plenty
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wow weeeeeeeeeeeeee
what can i say, thank you ladies for your wonderful comments... it means alot.
i tried to write how i felt as honestly and as heartfelt as i could, so i am glad it came across... and affected you too!
tingle, tingle. lol
Kx
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'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:59 pm |
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Xalia1
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K,
I can't believe I missed this one...
I loved it!
I like the way it pauses and flows then pauses again...
It drew me in.
Hella Hugs!
X~~
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