Joined: 17 Sep 2006
Posts: 1025
Location: that tragic backwater, the gulf coast of florida
Warm
Here in this corner
Of your sweet and round
You are sweet around me
With your healing hand upon me
And your sugar breath to warm me
Let this be where I belong
My broken back rewoven
Back together by your giving
In this soft and loving corner
Of your warm _________________ -
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"...a soul that wakes up to find itself wandering, unwanted, between the spheres."
Forgive me hon...it is a very nice and sweet poem but whether by intent or not it seems incomplete.
Either way I liked reading it
Hugs,
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Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:27 am
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
this makes me pause to catch my breath, at the end... and i just want to absorb the warm, because it takes my mind to those comforting arms that have never let me down... i can see why the e-girl says, incomplete, but for me, it's like, that need... that draws us to this place... it is a need (for me) that can never be extinguished, only shared... forever, across all space, time, physical divides...
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