My gaze falls upon your photograph,
The one I took on a Sunday morning.
I woke with the first hint of the sun,
Your hair fell in waves over your shoulder,
Your mouth formed a slight smile
With a hint of mystery that added to your presence.
You stirred at the gentle click of the camera,
As I spent the rest of the hour watching the air wander
And become trapped within your lips.
Fri Nov 07, 2008 10:59 am
smart_cookie
Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA
I always love your poetry, Lilu. This is no exception. The idea of framing the whole thing as a photograph is a neat idea.
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Fri Nov 07, 2008 6:25 pm
SummerJoy
Joined: 11 Jul 2005
Posts: 198
Location: England
Lilu,
A sweet story of your love - smoothly told in so few lines.
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