In the stillness of the pool I saw
A vision of what might be
The colours softly swirled around
Enfolding you and me
In the quietness of the imagery
Faintly I heard your song
And I listened as you sang to me
Of a place I might belong
So touched by my own emotions,
That I couldn't hear your call
I did not heed your warnings
And I let a teardrop fall
And it turned itself to crystal
And it fell into your pool
And the ripples took your image,
Leaving just this grieving fool
Oh, remorse is always futile
Since we cannot turn back time
So this careless act of madness
Lost the dream I'd hoped was mine
And now all I have remaining
Is the memory of your rose
Once with petals shyly opened
Now with petals gently closed _________________
For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return. --Leonardo da Vinci--
Sun Jul 26, 2009 2:44 pm
Dark prism
Joined: 10 Dec 2006
Posts: 865
Location: California Dreamin, baby.
Wow.
Love this!
Dp _________________ "Fighting for this girl - on the battlefield of love."
Sun Jul 26, 2009 5:08 pm
Tasty n Erotic
Joined: 26 May 2005
Posts: 196
Location: California
beautiful write Moon
I thank you for the sharing
take good care _________________ I stand before you...humbled in the presence of true beauty
Jade
Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:48 am
MysteryGirl Moderators
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
I reread this today.........and remembered why I found myself unable to comment on it the first time around. The well of emotions you make me feel chokes me still, as it did then.
Goddamn beautiful writing Moonie.
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
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