It’s amazing you see
What she does to me
Forget butterflies
Forget everything I thought I knew
This beautiful creature
How she whispers in the dark
Deep brown pools
See through to my soul
Time stops
Music fades
Heat fills me
Her beautiful smile
Forgetting
How to speak
How to breathe
Her essence consumes my being
I surrender
I give
I fold
I’m hers _________________ Never again
Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:49 pm
SWAY
Joined: 14 Apr 2005
Posts: 1560
Location: Upstate NY
simply amazing _________________ Giving myself to others has made me jaded...
Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:02 am
Jules
Joined: 22 Feb 2005
Posts: 904
Location: Home
I'm very glad you like it sweets...I'm rusty with writing but it seems someone has inspired me these days... _________________ Never again
Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:42 pm
GreenEyedKiss Moderators
Joined: 22 Jun 2005
Posts: 682
Location: Barony of the Angels in the Kingdom of Caid.
Jules,
A wonderful write. This was beautiful. _________________ "I don't know what I'm doing, but I'm getting it done." ~ADM
"What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others remains immortal"
Tue May 04, 2010 4:20 am
Jules
Joined: 22 Feb 2005
Posts: 904
Location: Home
Thanks Andikins...There are a lot of feelings that went into that...Now...it's mostly fear. I think I'm broken Andi so everything I touch turns to shit... _________________ Never again
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