When we were both young _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Sun Jun 05, 2011 4:56 am
MysteryGirl Moderators
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
What a great word picture you paint here, Avant Garde, I especially like the lines
I remember looking for treasure
Like two washed up pirates
I remember doing that with a friend too, when I was young.
Good to see you on the boards again.
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Sun Jun 05, 2011 7:45 am
Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
MG,
Thank you hun, this was written for my father , I just lost him on New Year's Eve. He was my best friend and I truly miss him. It is great to be back home at mels. It has always been a comforting place to be among friends.
~hugs _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Sun Jun 05, 2011 8:19 am
MdmPrez
Joined: 16 Oct 2007
Posts: 803
Location: US of A
av
This is so very sweet and allows the reader to picture you and your dad at the water's edge. So sorry about his loss, av.
Cat
Sun Jun 05, 2011 11:53 pm
Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
Cat,
Thank you so much hun, it really has left a huge void. Some days are more painful than others. He was an amazing person and my very best friend.
~hugs~ _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Mon Jun 06, 2011 1:02 am
EverydayAngelKarie
Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
another good one. i do love this one as well. great imagery, very sensory.
Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:07 am
Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
Eve,
Thank you hun , I hope there will be more for me write soon, it seems when there is a paint brush in hand my poetic muse tends to go into hiding..
~hugs _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
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