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When were both young

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Avant-garde



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Location: NY 		When were both young

 When we were both young

I remember sour dough pretzels

And coke frosties

Along the river bank

I remember looking for treasure

Like two washed up pirates

And how you taught me to skip

Stones across the tormented river

When we were both young

Perhaps you had several years on me

But inside you never grew old

Even though you seen far enough a head

You never once let that stop you

I remember our own never never land

How time stopped and everything was

An adventure or perhaps a grand mystery

Even though for now

You have to go on and play with out me

I will still remember……

When we were both young

How the salty taste of the pretzel blended

with the sweet essence of the frosty

like bitter sweet manna mixed with sorrow

So for now I will wait along

the tormented river

skip stones

and reminisce ……

When we were both young
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Post Sun Jun 05, 2011 4:56 am 
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MysteryGirl
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What a great word picture you paint here, Avant Garde, I especially like the lines

I remember looking for treasure

Like two washed up pirates


I remember doing that with a friend too, when I was young.

Good to see you on the boards again.





HugZ, MG
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Post Sun Jun 05, 2011 7:45 am 
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Avant-garde



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MG,

Thank you hun, this was written for my father , I just lost him on New Year's Eve. He was my best friend and I truly miss him. It is great to be back home at mels. It has always been a comforting place to be among friends.


~hugs
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Post Sun Jun 05, 2011 8:19 am 
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MdmPrez



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 This is so very sweet and allows the reader to picture you and your dad at the water's edge. So sorry about his loss, av.

Cat
Post Sun Jun 05, 2011 11:53 pm 
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Avant-garde



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Cat,

Thank you so much hun, it really has left a huge void. Some days are more painful than others. He was an amazing person and my very best friend.



~hugs~
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Post Mon Jun 06, 2011 1:02 am 
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EverydayAngelKarie



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another good one. i do love this one as well. great imagery, very sensory.
Post Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:07 am 
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Avant-garde



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Eve,

Thank you hun , I hope there will be more for me write soon, it seems when there is a paint brush in hand my poetic muse tends to go into hiding..




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