Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
Bugging Me Insectually
the mumbling bumblebee buzz
distorts the kaleidoscope fly eye
and traps it in the shoddy web
of the black and the widowed
sticky like caterpillar feet
crawling in millipedic hundreds
for the mosquito-larvae
growing quick like maggots
in a ladybug bath of decaying grasshopper
Wed Jun 29, 2011 9:20 am
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
I'm itchy now, Eda!
In this case, that would be the sign of some good writing!
~Eilidh
Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:59 pm
EverydayAngelKarie
Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
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