Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
Joplin on Parade
when you drove
me home after the
red rock party
black checkers trailed
through your eyes
like Nascar flags
encouraging speedway
flare and salt flat stride.
your pupils were
spinning like rims
over sea-cliff
trips and back,
and backflips
on illegal caps,
Portabella but
NOT Por-Ta-Bella.
then we were there.
you smiled awake
but unaware.
we kissed like
sour magnets.
the salt and blood
on my busted lip
painted music on your skin
and I left your car like
a flower-haired
Joplin on parade
and picked you some
driveway cracked pansies
that you still have
lying high and dry
on your hot ash dash.
Sun Aug 14, 2011 5:32 am
sanraye
Joined: 03 Sep 2007
Posts: 124
Location: Ohio
Nice Eda!!!! Love your writes!!! _________________ Peace & Love !!
San
Sun Aug 14, 2011 5:44 am
MysteryGirl Moderators
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
I LOVE the way words flow out of you EDA!
"hot ash dash"....brilliant alliteration.
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