Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
Jealous Lovers Touch the Mirror of Mercury
I was chaperoning a birthday party and dreaming of a kiss with you,
while you were aimless anemone phalanges stinging clown fish with static, scooping and sifting through sand until only one grain embraced the central groove loop of your left thumb print, idly balancing in rainbow ordinance on rose petal rise, stretching a rubber ladder pitch to aurora as you introduced the music of drip castles to the stars.
I was thinking about how I’d love to lay with you on the moon,
yet you were gawking at the high violet sunset of graves and the intelligent growth of green in Golden Gate Park with fluorescent fogs foraging your forged forests and zebra stripes combing through the spaces between your fingers while you brushed your invisible moustache with faberge twigs and grayscale ladybug wings.
I was waiting for the steady breath of romance to explode from our volcanic mouths to create cyclones of bloody tongues gushing the rusty flavor of jealous lovers touch and for the mirror of Mercury to be a soldier on our side guarding us from the war of scientific proof,
but you were Pluto
intent on ditching your role
as ninth rock from the sun.
Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:11 am
PipSqueak
Joined: 04 Jul 2008
Posts: 987
Location: S.W. England
EAK, I am too tired to even begin unravelling this but I couldn't slow down reading it. I love the language of the words from the sound to the little firework bursts of colour & images. I'll come back to it tomorrow with a clear head.
It's like a pop song where you get carried away with the melody & miss all the lyrics!! Night! _________________ .............................................................
Previously PurpleUK
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