Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
Drowning
I had dived into the depths
Of your ocean-fresh, inviting kiss
Without first checking the swell report
Now buffeted by unexpected waves
I’m treading water and signalling for help
Your lips have barely grazed mine
Hardly more than a wet whisper of touch
From a dolphin slipping by seawards
Yet I’m seared like a hot tar caulking brush
Freshly removed from the coals
And like a foolhardy surfer
Plucked from her board by a monster wave
I tumble, without knowing which way is up
And drowning, clutch at the nearest rescue rings
Soft tendrils of hair at the nape of your neck
That most basic of instincts
Survival, keeps me kicking toward the light
But unlike a vampire whose feeding only takes
This kiss exchanges your air for mine
And we buddy-breath till finally breaking the surface
Pushing up from the shoreline
Of your couch, my feet touch solid ground
Yet, even exchanging awkward rescuer/victim hugs I know
We’ll go swimming in your liquid kiss again
But maybe next time I’ll wear a life jacket!
, _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Sun Sep 18, 2011 12:36 pm
brachingritualz
Joined: 31 Mar 2007
Posts: 248
Sounds promising...though in real life, flotation devices offer about as much protection from a good kiss as cement blocks keep one from drowning. Nevertheless, you make it sound worth dying for _________________ shemovesme.wordpress.com
Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:51 pm
MdmPrez
Joined: 16 Oct 2007
Posts: 803
Location: US of A
MG
Wow, it sounds like you barely survived one heck of a kiss! Kiss #2 should be a real humdinger.
This is very well written, MG.
Cat
Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:34 pm
MysteryGirl Moderators
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
quote:Originally posted by brachingritualz:
Sounds promising...though in real life, flotation devices offer about as much protection from a good kiss as cement blocks keep one from drowning. Nevertheless, you make it sound worth dying for
I agree with you about those flotation devices Brach, there is NO protection from a good kiss except not to repeat it LOL
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:27 am
MysteryGirl Moderators
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
Re: MG
quote:Originally posted by MdmPrez:
Wow, it sounds like you barely survived one heck of a kiss! Kiss #2 should be a real humdinger.
This is very well written, MG.
Cat
See my comment to Brach, Mdm....a kiss like the first for No. 2 and I would be going down for the third time!
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
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